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May 14, 2012
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Thank you for checking out my story.
Please give it a chance, I put a lot of time and effort into it and it would mean a lot to me. c:

If the chapter doesn't work after you press play, return to the menu and try again. Sometimes it takes a while to load.

Chapter 2


The first book in the Forever Wings series.

On Earth I, the earth that was the prototype for ours, everything that ever was was made of many different codes.
A code for appearance, personality, intelligence, life and fate.
No one truly had free will, for every part of them had already been decided before they came to exist.
One day, the gods that programmed the earth decided on an experiment.
They decided to create a single person who truly had free will.
In order to do this, however, they needed to make him part god, for gods are the only beings capable of existing without any codes.
Given true, limitless free will, the demigod became consumed by his power.
He ended up going mad.
This resulted in the premature deaths of 3 people.
They died far before their code had programmed them to.
That's when Muu, the goddess of fate, created the rebirth contract.
She allowed these 3 people to get a second chance at completing their life, by reusing the code of fate from their dead selves.
Wanting a second test for allowing free will, the gods created a new demigod to go alongside the other 3 rebirthed people.

However, little did Muu know, her Rebirth Contract was very, VERY flawed.

The world is breaking due to all the glitches these three rebirthed people have created...
The universe wants to get rid of them before they create anymore harm to the system.
Will free will save the world... or destroy it?

In this story, you'll see through the eyes of Hero Frazier, Blank Lane, Dots Stills and Nya Lane.
You'll watch them rise...
And you'll watch them fall...

This is the story of four individuals whose very existence glitches the world around them.
The story of how these four must walk in the footsteps of cursed, broken, unstable and doomed people.
They may meet the same fate as their original counterparts.
Or perhaps their past selves will help them overcome this doomed fate.
The real question is, can their sanity handle it?

(By the way, this Visual Novel is not dating sim, does not have multiple endings and is a full fledged story. It updates a chapter a week in 8 acts so it's pretty damn long. Things get progressively more complex as the story goes and it's not a light read. This VN contains violence, sexual themes and coarse language.)
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FireUnleaser Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is a good story did u use a tutorial to do it?
CinnamonRollo Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A long time ago I searched up how to make buttons on flash. After I learned, I mostly put two and two together and tought myself how to make the VN with lots of work and experimenting. c:
FireUnleaser Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ok. c:
Ui-Azuma May 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So far so good. :)
CinnamonRollo May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you! >w<
Ui-Azuma May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Your welcome. :)
I do like the direction this is going!
It's actually quite cute. :heart:
CinnamonRollo May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you're enjoying so far! c:
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